I think what you've got here is fantastic! This whole thing bleeds aesthetic. I think even if some of the areas you wanted to finish are still unfinished it doesn't detract from the overall product. I think it would be very nice to see what it would look like 100% complete, but as it stands now, what you have is a beautiful piece of art.

Very good ideas, nice presentation! Loved how you imagined the setting and scenario. Characters were recognizable and i think it would be cool to see a more finished product with cleaner linework.

Shit lookie cool. I liked how fluid the fight scene looked for what there was. I'm sure it's just a test so far, but I'd definitely enjoy watching an extended scene. Your title crawl looked pretty clean too. Good job out there.